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Lore Name
Thor Odinson

Rank
Junior Researcher

SCP
1048

Question / Idea
How will SCP-1048 respond to being put in various outfits?

Background Research
SCP-1048 is a sentient being, who has the appearance of stuffed rabbit.
In terms of clothing, SCP-1048 has always been observed to just wear a black bow tie.
This is logical because all rabbits wear bow ties. However, aside from the singular bow tie, SCP-1048 is basically naked.

Hypothesis
SCP-1048 will be grateful to receive such fine attire?

Preparation
SCP-1048 had been given 3 outfits each labelled from A to C.
-Outfit A is a Doctor's Uniform, dressed with mint colored gloves, aprons, and head wear.
-Outfit B is a Policeman's Uniform, equipped with its very own miniature handcuffs, baton, and toy pistol.
-Outfit C is a frilly pink dress, with a small, shiny tiara.

Observation
After much struggle, from onsite Security, Outfit A had been successfully dawned onto SCP-1048. After a few seconds of processing the outfit, SCP-1048 began to crawl towards Thor Odinson, and pressed its tiny stethoscope against his muscular leg. SCP-1048 then listened carefully, while maneuvering the stethoscope, as if it were listening for a heart beat. A short while later, SCP-1048 began to gesture as if it had gasped in surprise, and began staring at people in the room, as if it were shocked to discover the lack of a heart.

After getting use to the procedure, Outfit B had been worn on SCP-1048, with relative ease. After a short moment to ponder its new uniform, SCP-1048 began too charge at the nearest Class-D personnel, at top speeds (Which of course, being a stuffed rabbit, was not very fast). SCP-1048 then planted in front of the nearest Class-D, who was restrained on a wall by nearby security, and began to gesture its hand forward, as if it were ordering it to halt. SCP-1048 then proceeded to attempt and climb the Class-D's legs, in an attempt to further restrain it, with its miniature cuffs. After a short struggle, and almost falling, SCP-1048 had succeed by tying the Class-D's 2 index fingers together.

Unlike Outfit B, SCP-1048 showed much hesitation towards being dressed with Outfit C. Due to SCP-1048's persistent struggle, a second security officer had to be introduced, in an effort to dress SCP-1048. After a 10 minute struggle, Outfit C had been successfully put on SCP-1048. However due to SCP-1048's hesitation against the outfit, it proceeded to sit in place with its arms crossed, as if it were refusing to "play along".

Conclusion
SCP-1048 has been observed to show excitement towards being dressed in clothing, and will often role play as the outfit's respective occupation. However, as seen in Outfit C, SCP-1048 has shown an immense aversion against outfits that may be considered "girly", and will refuse to continue said role play, if it is ever dawned in such garbs.

Edited by God Of Thunder
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Score - 90
Grade - Quality


Lore - 20/20
SCP-1048 has generally acted just like it has in lore. On the surface, it was observed to be a sentient toy, that was designed to be played with by children. SCP-1048's response was only natural.

Creativity - 17/20
Though I have seen this concept done before, the execution is magnificent. Each outfit has a specific and unique scenario, giving much variety in the results.

Presentation - 16/20
This test gas generally followed the format, however the use of color and even spacing has made it very easy and pleasant to look at.

Writing - 37/40
I am unable to find any general mistakes in your writing, as the grammar and punctuation is basically fine. However I do wish that you had put more detail into Outfit C, as its results seemed a bit lackluster compared to Outfit A, and Outfit B. The conclusion could also have been lengthier, however most of the general information is there. Some insight about the security personnel would have been useful as well. But other than that, I can't find anything else wrong with the writing.

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