Tomato Posted February 1, 2020 Share Posted February 1, 2020 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Io6JwObBKQR5lVmipUdbSXTUyypybVFPzjM3YYxQ-50/edit?usp=sharing Former DHOR Tomato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breen Posted February 1, 2020 Share Posted February 1, 2020 i fucking love this and i love local 58 the moon short story is one of my favorite things from local 58 very good work potato this is amazing. gave me chills gog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomato Posted February 1, 2020 Author Share Posted February 1, 2020 i see breen is a man of culture as well Former DHOR Tomato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protege Posted February 5, 2020 Share Posted February 5, 2020 Grade: 95 Lore: 20/20 This is a new SCP that you created so there can't be any lore problems. Creativity: 20/20 I like the idea of the SCP and I think this could be something that could actually go on the wiki. Presentation: 15/20 I like that you attempted to use the white text that is sometimes seen in SCP files, but you used ////// instead of the black boxes. Writing: 40/40 I don't see any problems with the spelling/grammar in this and there are so many different documents full of writing. Test quality: Quality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breen Posted February 6, 2020 Share Posted February 6, 2020 On 2/4/2020 at 6:05 PM, Protege said: Grade: 95 Lore: 20/20 This is a new SCP that you created so there can't be any lore problems. Creativity: 20/20 I like the idea of the SCP and I think this could be something that could actually go on the wiki. Presentation: 15/20 I like that you attempted to use the white text that is sometimes seen in SCP files, but you used ////// instead of the black boxes. Writing: 40/40 I don't see any problems with the spelling/grammar in this and there are so many different documents full of writing. Test quality: Quality why did you grade this, who tf assigned this to you 1 gog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomato Posted February 6, 2020 Author Share Posted February 6, 2020 thank you protege Former DHOR Tomato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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