Davedvch Posted December 30, 2019 Share Posted December 30, 2019 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TYWDdtqBkyTrqWLZAJRizs0s1YWcXsgyUz0UoEdXCHs/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Watkin Posted December 30, 2019 Share Posted December 30, 2019 Grade: 83% Lore: 16/20 I liked how you followed the lore pretty well but under background research, I would like if you gave more information related to the test such as past experiences 912 could have had with these situations or even some swat tactics you think 912 could have used. Creativity: 20/20 I don't think I have seen a test like this and am very happy to see you adding variety to the research branch Presentation: 17/20 I think that you could have made the google doc a bit more appealing such as adding pictures or something but I am a sucker for that medical record you added close to the end, well done. Writing: 30/40 I found that I could not pick out any spelling errors within this doc and again loved the extra little medical record but some of the things that you put within the analysis/conclusion section, could have gone in a separate observations section Test Quality: Standard Former Research Administrator/OR1 Dr. Watkin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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