Beepis Posted August 19, 2019 Share Posted August 19, 2019 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HK0s_6J-5ABYeIaZD4klRRvTIvqLVvzDYce0x0qlwSQ/edit?usp=sharing Retired E-11Captain Beepis 3R7H "It takes many good deeds to build a good reputation, and only one bad one to lose it" -Benjamin Franklin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kumandant Posted August 20, 2019 Share Posted August 20, 2019 (edited) Score: 16/100 Grade: N/A Lore: 6/20 The D-Class should not have died instantly. No word was said about the D-Class acknowledging SCP-012 in anyway, and it just comes off as silly that he just died as soon as he walked in there. However, the hypothesis was somewhat accurate. Presentation: 3/20 This test is poorly formatted. The information listed on the top is weirdly arranged, and the section listed as "Class-D Involved" is literally empty. There wasn't even a security personnel mentioned in listing. Creativity: 3/20 The effectiveness of restraints on Class-D have been performed even in canonical test logs. Detail: 4/40 Each segment only consisted of a single sentence with little to no detail and many grammar mistakes. The background research is somewhat acceptable, however it still suffers for the same reasons. For future reference, try to at least add some description on how the D-Class died to make up for the anti climactic outcome. Edited August 20, 2019 by Kumandant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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