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TheAmericanMan22

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  1. Efficiency: 23/25 • Straight to the point with questions. - Uncuffed the hostage. Never uncuff those sneaky foundation members. >: ( Insight: 13/25 - Not a ton of information of use. Presentation: 15/25 - Standard format Writing: 24/25 • Grammar looks good, and nothing really stands out. - A few missing punctuations. Grade: 75/100 Additional comment: Insight, from what I’ve been told is information that people will look back at. When it comes to that category we’re looking to know more about the person: what they do, what their branch does, what their keycard does and has access to, what their superiors do, what their subbranches do, and etc etc. Hell you could even ask them their favorite color. You just need to ask more questions, especially if they’re a command member like he was. They know a lot more then you think. Unless there was some other reason as to why more questions weren’t asked, like if he was killed or something else that’s not in your control? Other then that, remember your punctuations as well. Good job. : > Overall: C
  2. Efficiency: 25/25 • Straight to the point. • Tortured and showed no mercy. Insight: 20/25 • Not a lot of information of use, but we’ll take what we can get. Wish more could’ve been asked…dang recruits. Presentation: 15/25 • Standard format Writing: 20/25 • A few small grammar mistakes. Grade: 80/100 Additional comment: Spend some time making your own format. If you put time and effort into making your own it will deff score you some very high grades. With not a whole lot of information, and also with the result I would’ve scrapped the log. But that’s also not your fault. Other then that, you’re on the right track. Good work! Overall: B-
  3. -SUPPORT Like I said in the other report. It's off hours, live a little man. Take a joke for once.
  4. +SUPPORT Atleast let us use longbows. We bought it so we could use it. And if not the Dclass as a whole, then maybe just the CCs.
  5. +Support •Former Staff •Good ranks •All around good guy
  6. Efficiency: 23/25 • Very swift and straight to the point. Asked questions right away. Insight: 19/25 • Learning of different branches command members is nice. However, I’m not sure how a simple RS which is Low Command in research, would know the name of an E11 HCMD. But that isn’t your fault, so I won’t deduct any kind of points for that. Presentation: 18/25 • Standard format, with some slight changes and also gifs. Writing: 14/25 • Quite a few grammar mistakes from things like: capitalization, some places where you could use commas or periods, and etc. Grade: 74/100 Comment(s): • Trying scanning your document through a grammar checker. They’re worth it, and will scan your documents for any kind of mistakes and give you suggestions for free. You can use the grammar checker that Google Docs provides, or search one on the internet. • I like your use of gifs in your document, but take some more time on making your own format. It’s not bad especially as a JA, I see that you’re on the right track. With a little more time and effort on your format it could be perfect. It takes time and dedication to make perfect format. I’d suggest looking at other peoples formats for ideas and examples cause this could deff help you, but don’t steal their format entirely. Overall Grade: B Good work and keep it up!
  7. Your name: Your Discord ID name (EX: Igneous#3706): Your Discord ID code (EX: 204661777512923136): Which discord server were you banned on? What was the reason for your ban (if you know it)? Why do you deserve to be unbanned? Use the full format or they’re gonna automatically deny it.
  8. -Support No. You pledged loyalty to Chaos Insurgency. +Support :trollface:
  9. -Support Please no more based Juggernauts +Support…
  10. No balls. YOU WON’T! +Huge Support •He’s very active •Very dedicated •And a great leader
  11. -Support Average Jugg and Gensec cc sweat Jkjk lol +SUPPORT Give this dude senior cmd
  12. Bro tf? Gotta be racist on god +Support Flour is cool. Especially for cooking
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