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jackpbeachboy

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  1. Hello, here is your grade for this test log Grammar 25/25: no errors seen Creativity 25/25: I have not seen at test log with a visual stimuli being a video of the test instead of just pictures Effort 25/25: made a video for the test Incorporation of other branches (bonus) 10/25: incorporated security Total score: 85/75 good Job
  2. Hello, here is your grade Grammar 25/25: no mistakes seen Effort 25/25: Good use of pictures and a good format Creativity 25/25: I don't believe I've seen this test done before Incorporation of other branches (bonus) 5/25: good use of RIG units Total: 80/75 good job
  3. Hello again, here is your test log grade Grammar 25/25: No errors seen Effort 25/25: nice use of pictures and it included a timeline of events Creativity 23/25: while I have seen this type of test done before, it is still interesting Incorporation of other branches (bonus) 10/25: Good use of a GENSEC escort Total: 83/75 good job
  4. +support +Active +Friendly to all people +responsible +Doesn't make grammatical errors
  5. Hello, here is your command grading Grammar 25/25: no mistakes seen Effort 25/25: good job on the format and pictures for this Creativity 25/25: nice to see a test done on 244 and 457. interesting test idea with interesting results incorporation of other branches (bonus) 10/25: good use of the GENSEC branch Total: 85/75 nice work
  6. Hello Phrog, This is the grade you got Creativity 25/25: I haven't seen a lot of tests done with 079 in a while, nice to finally see some again Effort 25/25: nice change of format and text coloring to further contrast who was talking when Grammar 25/25: no mistakes seen Incorporation of other branches (bonus): 0/25: no other branches incorporated Total: 75/75 Good job
  7. Hello Luci, nice to see that you're still causing damage to other people's property, anyways here is your grade Grammar: 25/25: excellent grammar, no mistakes that I see Creativity 27/25: You made your own SCP and made it's own containment procedures, good job Effort 25/25: Like I said earlier, you made your own SCP with it's own containment procedures. I see that as effort put into this document Incorporation of other branches (bonus) 0/25: There was no incorporation of other branches Total: 77/75 Nice
  8. Hello, here is the grading that was requested Grammar: 25/25: no spelling errors Effort 25/25: I like the way you changed the background and the font Creativity 20/25: While I have seen this test done before, it is still a good test nonetheless Incorporation of other branches (bonus) 0/25: There were no other branches incorporated in this test, but then again, some tests don't require other branches Total: 70/75 Good job
  9. + support He is very fun to be around and does some nice test logs
  10. Another good test Style 25/25: once again, another good use of different fonts and layouts Grammar 25/25: no mistakes found Creativity 22/25: a test I have seen done before, but not on a one way door or taken to this extent Incorporation of other branches 5/25: not a lot of other branches incorporated Total: 77/75
  11. Hello Jummy, glad to grade your first doc Style 25/25: nice use of different fonts and page layout Grammar 25/25: no spelling errors that I found Creativity 25/25: you asked a good question that I have yet to hear from anyone else Incorporation of other branches 25/25: used d-class along with rig, but didn't use security or medical. Although, if they were online you would have Incorporated 3/4 branches P.S. I don't believe a tin foil hat blocks memetic hazards, try a copper one next time
  12. Roster Name: Jack SteamID: I forgor, pls forgive Current Rank: Research Supervisor Activity level (Out of 10): 8
  13. Roster name: Jack Steam ID: ( I can't currently get it now, but I will later) Current rank: RS SRLTR Activity level (out of 10): 6 Notes: LOA ends today
  14. Grade: Spelling: 12/25 Multiple spelling errors, such as 'Identities' instead of entities Random capitalization at some points Design: 25/25 Good design and font for the document. Nice emphasis on it being for level 3+ personnel Effort: 25/25 I can tell that you put effort into this just by the fact that you typed 3 paragraphs and some notes as well. You clearly put some time into making this Incorporation of other groups ( MTF/D-class/maintenance/ect.) bonus: 15/25 You had D-class, other SCPs, and a security escort (I'm guessing since you had D-class) TOTAL: 77/75
  15. Grade: Design: 25/25 The design is great, almost what you would see in an actual SCP file. If you continue to do stuff like this, you will make it very far in this sector. Spelling: 23/25 From what I've read, there are very few spelling errors. In the conclusion, you put "when asked about his past. And perhaps has something against CI" you put a period instead of a comma. Other than that, I would have put "as seen above" in parentheses instead of a new sentence all together. Effort: 25/25 Just by looking at this I can tell that you put some time and effort into making this interview log. Incorporation of other groups ( MTF/D-class/maintenance/ect. (bonus): 5/25 I'm going to assume you had MTF nearby while doing this interview, but other than that, there isn't much incorporation of other groups here. TOTAL: 78/75 Good Job
  16. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J_YHvP5BoL7qNgUu6jwPF9j3lyNrfddcG994gasQplU/edit This is my first doc so please give me any pointers if you can, thanks.
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