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  1. ROA or LOA: ROA Name: Billybob Rank: ET Start Date: 5/21/22 End Date: 6/7/22 Reason: Military Orders up to Massachusetts, for two weeks.
  2. DENIED Please wait 3 weeks before reapplying For more information please send me or Smitty a discord message
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  4. ROA or LOA: LOA Name: Billybob Rank: ET Mod Start Date: 5/12/22 End Date: 5/18/22 Reason: Moving into new house.
  5. GRAMMAR: (7/10) Grammar is slightly more advanced than average. No major flaws. PRESENTATION: (6.5/10) This terminal design was very well executed. But some of the text was very hard to read. The written down dialogue was well done, but again font too small making it hard on the eyes to read. There are a lot of good things in this and then there are some area's that need more work. "Quality of Quantity" And this had some great quality of work. Just not enough detail for my personal standards. But the graphics were a wonderful touch. LORE: (7/10) I will not lie, I do not know enough about SCP 280 to give proper critiques about the lore on this one. So for now I'll leave this neutral grade, and come back later with better detail. CREATIVITY: (6.5/10) This test was very well executed. There was a lot of potential for this document to be even more astounding than what was presented. Remember always to include details of what happened. Tell the story. Going from short explanation of SCP, to short test description, to short ending. That's were you missed the mark. Something I encourage a lot of writers is to take creative liberty within reason. OVERALL: 6.75/10 -Agent Grizzly OA1
  6. GRAMMAR: (6/10) Grammar here is overall simple. Nothing too complex. Points were clear and concise but contained little detail. What I would love to see moving forward is more attention to detail in your writing PRESENTATION: (5/10) The terminal format was a good attempt! BUT please start implementing a references page if you are going to utilize information gathered from the SCP wiki. With creation terminal designs its important to make sure all the design fits in. Including Font. The was a lack of detail within the document itself as well, again moving forward thing "quality not quantity" LORE: (4/10) Now with SCP-008-1, Those specimens cannot be transported out of a designated hazmat room. SCP-008 would have the ability to spread rampant throughout the facility. Creating mass infections. Another area you missed was explaining the security measures you took to perform this test. So make sure you annotate what measures you took. CREATIVITY: (6.5/10) Overall though, this test is creative. I think you could have done a lot more with it but you missed the mark on a good some of it. details, details, details, details. Those will be your best friend. OVERALL: 5.3/10 -Agent Grizzly OA1
  7. DENIED AFTER CLOSE OBSERVATION, AS WELL AS GOING THROUGH YOUR DOCUMENTS. WE HAVE DECIDED TO DENY YOUR REQUEST TO JOIN. YOU MAY EITHER PROVE YOURSELF ON SITE, OR REAPPLY IN 3 WEEKS.
  8. This test log was submitted to the RFA request for grading. If you wish for it to be graded as such please switch the documents title to contain "RFA Requesting Grading -" Failure to do so will result in this document to be graded normally be Research Command. Thank You - Agent Grizzly OA1
  9. Wasn't Added to CC, which I payed for a slot. Name Billybob SteamID: STEAM_0:0:61232729 CC NAME: CI "Reaper Squadron" It's been two restarts and I still wasn't added. ORIGINAL POST: Proof of donations:
  10. Roster Name: TheRealNydekore1234 Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:amNydekore Current Rank: Regional Sites Head of Research Activity: -4/10 Notes: I am Nydekore.
  11. YOUR APPLICATION HAS BEEN RECIEVED
  12. WELCOME ABOARD AGENT...
  13. Resignation Denied… Please try again in 2 weeks. But in actuality I hate to see ya go my man… I honestly wish you could have stayed longer, and maybe taken over the RFA branch when I’ll eventually be done. Everyone on this server was impacted by you in some way or another. You did everything you could do here, and I’m happy that you’re able to go and join another area and make an impact on them. Just like you did for us. This isn’t goodbye I know, but more like see you around. Have a great time on ImperialRP my friend. p.s. shoot some rebels for me
  14. Your Application Has Been Received... -AGENT GRIZZLY OA1
  15. +Support on rewording of warn to "FailRP" It was poor decision making on my part I will agree,. I'll admit my fault with this, but was going with all the information I was presented at the time, where Biggie had shot first, alongside with him being a noncombatant attacking an SCP would fall under FailRP instead of ARDM. In the quoted message he even confirms that he shot first. I don't believe it matters if the SCP is "godded" When a noncombatant attacks an allied SCP that would still be failRP. But if anyone has some information to shed on this I'd greatly accept it.
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