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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rz_fn8a2Ux84OBnJl_VOdVCdL875XBJ612xQbO2GKlw/edit?usp=sharing,Please Grade! Also, anyone who just reads this and is not the member grading it pleasssssse feel free to leave feedback and let me know if I should continue/make this into a series of logs! Thanks!
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100/100 Format: So I love that you colored some of the text this time and I still really like your cover page as well has how you format the video links. Your test log format is also easy to follow along and unique to you, I haven't seen another test log format that even looks like yours in design or color. Great work! Test Question/Idea: I am really enjoying this little series of figuring out what each SCP does to SCP-682 and I am eager to read your next one! Also you used plenty of detail as well as attaching videos again, which is awesome for anyone who reads your test log! Test Length: Normally when I see 3 page test logs I kinda already am leaning to a worse grade BUT you use the 1st page for a intro page as everyone does, but instead of flooding your test log with background info you condense everything that happened during your test in 1 to two pages which is super hard to do and still be able to create a great test log out of it! Overall: DUUUUUUUUUUDE NICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCE LOG!!!! I am so glad I have been able to grade your 682 series and I am eager to see what your next log is about!! Keep up the great work!
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95/100 Format: Your format is amazing! I love the clearance level stuff on the beginning on your google document! Also the colors you use work very well together and make it easy to read. BUT it seems a little crowded and the text for the most part was only a single color, and I definitely think some stuff should have been [REDACTED] but not like that. Like this [REDACTED] Test question/Idea: I loved your idea! It's original and something that could genuinely be used to help eliminate SCP-682 or at least contain it. Also I think it's something you could make a mini series about if you wanted to! Test Length: Great length, a bit on the short side, BUT it still answers your question fully and has all the needed information there. Secondly great job including the videos, it's always nice to see what your test was in server and how you were conducting it. Overall: A SUPER AWESOME TEST LOG!!, Demi I've seen your tests improve greatly over the past months and you're so close to a 100 and I can't wait to see your next log!! Keep up the good work man!
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80/100 Format: Your formatting is pretty good. Lot of originality and color usage. It highlights what you want to be seen and is easy to read. But for the [REDACTED] stuff don't just leave it like that, this looks more professional [REDACTED]. To make it look like that just highlight the word the same color you have the text of the word. Also nice job using pictures that actually depict what is going on in the test! Other than that it looks good. Test Question/Idea: Now the idea isn't horrible but I have seen really good logs from ya before and would love to see some of those again. Funny log though, made me laugh out loud while I was reading it. Test Length: Not a whole lot to say about the length it's pretty short but understandably so due to the nature of the Test question. Overall: Not a bad Test log, funny but not informative.
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90/100 Format: Dude your format is amazing per usual. I like the color scheme you use with the page color and text color. Could not find anything that I disliked about your format. It was very clear to read and enjoyable to look at! Test Log Question/Idea: So your test question/idea isn't bad in that I haven't seen many SCP-682 interviews so that's cool. Also I really liked the audio clips of SCP-682's responses though that was a nice touch and I did learn a few things about SCP-682 that I didn't know about before, Like the thing with SCP-343 not knowing where SCP-682 came from. But not a lot of information was gathered and Interviews are hard to do considering it requires the person playing the SCP to be a good sport about roleplaying. So that's not really on you but remember you can write a log that did not physically happen in the server! But maybe instead of a general "I will be interviewing SCP-682 about why he hates humans or just a general interview". Try to do something like "I will be interviewing SCP-682 about how he feels pain and what it's like to be constantly regenerating" or "Can SCP-682 control his body changing and regenerating to adapt to certain scenarios and if so how does he control that?". Test length: Your test length was great! It wasn't too short or just be mainly the background information about the SCP that you were testing on. Great job! Overall: Great log and keep it up, I'm excited to grade more of your logs!
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Not terrible formatting but I highly recommend using google docs because it's great for custom formats. Your test question/idea is pretty good, definitely original and on an uncommonly used SCP. Your test is a bit short though. Overall great work!!
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AWESOME FORMATTING, I always enjoy reading google docs and seeing what kind of format everyone comes with. I really like yours except the color usage doesn't really match or flow. It doesn't look bad or anything but I would play with it some more. Also noticed quite a few typos. Especially in your rank, you are an Experienced Researcher not an Experience Researcher. Your test question/idea is super original which is awesome and not only is it original but it was done on an SCP that is not really tested on like ever so good job on that! Your test length is perfect! Overall Great Job!! Keep it up!
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Awesome formatting bud! But again google docs are easier to use and have aloooooooooot of stuff you can mess around with to make a format that is unique to you! Also your current format seems a bit colorless so I would work on that. But overall awesome format!! Your test question/idea is a bit confusing here, thankfully I have read your previous test logs and was able to understand what you were talking about but try to make each submission on here its own test log, for example I only have written Test logs that are a part of a SERIES. So I have a running theme or end goal but discover something new in each log. SO that a person who just starts reading in the middle of my series will still be able to understand what is going on in my log. As for the length of your test it seems this is not a stand-alone test but an addition to one of your previous logs. So the fact that its two pages is pretty good.
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So your format is AWESOME dude! Always good to see a google doc just because of how easy it is to create formats. But play around with this one some more, color some some text and maybe play with the fonts! Your test idea is pretty original considering SCP-999 is one of the most tested on SCPs. So good job on that! BUT it is a bit off an odd test question because what would we as the Foundation do with that information? None the less your test idea was good! Your length of the test is pretty gosh darn good as well. Not too short but not going in circles long. AWESOME WORK for your FIRST LOG!! Keep it up.
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LOVIN THE FORMAT! Test idea again is original and interesting, which isn't easy to do. Length is short and to the point which isn't bad, BUT I would love to see what you could come up with on a longer log! Keep up the great work!
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AR Stepanyan 610 Communications test
Wagner replied to Dion The Goat's topic in Foundation Test Logs
AWESOME FORMAT!! Feels super realistic. Test log idea is original and well thought out. The length is a bit short but it still answers your test question fully and clearly! Great log! -
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wK92KLyJYL0mzZjkM3peMKLnpQTGbBSt-bfKKW5wO6o/edit?usp=sharing, Please grade!
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AWESOME FORMAT again, BUT I noticed some of the "Conversational parts of the log" were a bit clumped together, I really liked that you kept certain words or people the same color throughout the log. Also it's good to include the background information about the SCPs that you are testing on BUT make sure that doesn't take the majority of your log. Feel free to make stuff up, just try not to contradict what the lore is already. Nice test idea, again it's common for Researchers to use SCP-999 to calm other SCPs but again that's ok as long as it's a well written log. Which this log is! Length again isn't bad but it does seem the background information takes up most of you log (which is ok). So I don't know if that's info you got from the SCP Wiki or what. For future logs just try to keep that in mind. Another really well done log!
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AWESOME FORMATTING! Always love to see a google doc being used and then a well formatted google doc. BUT it could use a bit more color or headers maybe, It's well formatted in that It is easy to read and understand what your goals are. As well as what you discovered. Your test log idea was pretty neat, I enjoyed the amount of info you used from the wiki lore and built on it! Also now I know WAAAAY more about SCP-008 and SCP-610. Which to me is awesome that you made a log that actually informs the reader about both SCPs in depth Awesome length man, Ton of detail and kept my attention the entire time I was reading it! Good work!
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This log was super fun to read, gave a funny yet still scientific description of what happened! A few parts actually made me chuckle out loud lol. Your format is pretty good considering you just made it in the post but for future logs I recommend using Google Docs. Google Docs lets ya play around with different font sizes, styles, color, and just a bunch of fun stuff! Lastly the length for this test is pretty good as well! Good work!!
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NIIIICE LOGGGG! I really dig your format, it has good colors, layout design, text sizes and fonts. Very well done! Your test idea isn't bad per say just very common that people compare SCP-049 to SCP-008 and SCP-008-1 BUT you made yours original by adding conversation and the Raid that happened during your test, so that really brought it back! Lastly the length of your test is a good size and not too short. Keep up the great work!
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I really like the idea of this test log. Using the SCPs to test out things we could use them for. Very creative question! But your format is a bit bland, BUUUUT that isn't hard to fix, I recommend you try out using Google Docs for your future test logs and mess around until you find a format you like the most! Lastly for this test I again really enjoy you question but I am bummed that it's this short, Keep up the good work though! I'm excited to see what you think of for your next log!
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DUUUUUUUUUDE This is an AWESOME LOG!!!!, GREAT format. Awesome use of colors and the layout/headers you used look perfect man. Also the audio logs were well written. Can't wait to see more test logs from ya! Keep it up!
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DUUUUUUUUUUUDE just read this after work and I loved it man. SUPER AWESOME test log idea as well as very original. I have never heard of someone seeing if SCP-008 is sentient and can interact with other people or SCPs. This could easily be a really entertaining series, keep up the great work! Also as usual GREAT formatting my guy!
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Fun test log dude for real, and for a "Dumb short test log" it looks great and the flow of the language is great. Super easy to read and you even included pictures and some bomb formatting! Wouldn't expect anything less from a CMD member! Nice work!
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AWWWWWESOME FORMATTTTTING Zach, for real nice work with the google doc and good job including all of your background research. I read all of it and it was very through BUT I noticed your actual test was pretty short, so its good to include a lot of background research but try not to have more background research than whatever you actual log, otherwise Nice log man!
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DUUUUUUDE this is an awesome log!!!, It's a great length (could be a bit longer) and depth of detail is great. Also the FORRRRRRRRRRRRRRMAT is awesome but feel free to play around with other colors and layouts but this format is gooooood!
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hey bud ya didnt share the public link
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Pretty short log, but good content, I prolly would have put this in the Activity Logs channel in the discord server! But good log still!
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DUUUUDE, NIIICE LOG!!!, I love the depth and length of this test log. Also the fact that you included multiple questions and answers for each question in an easy to read format. Thirdly your format is clear and easy to read BUT its kinda normal, so I'd recommend putting this on a google doc and messing around with coloring and different font styles and texts to see what you like, other than that this is an awesome log my guy! Good work!