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  1. Overall Grade: 8.5/10 Lore: 9/10 Well done! It is interesting to see a look inside the psychology of a otherwise mute SCP. Creativity: 9/10 Another excellent interview with the SCP, this is a great test that showed surprising results for a being as compassionate as SCP-999. Presentation: 8/10 Excellent formatting and presentation! Writing: 8/10 Great work! There is a small cutoff within the second paragraph of your testing procedure. "then tell SCP-999 to press one button based on. SCP-999 will record their answers..." It seems as though you were about to explain the purpose but then cutoff the original sentence and restarted it with another sentence. Overall Notes: Aside from the small erroneous sentence, this is an excellent test! Keep up the great work!
  2. Overall Grade: 8.5/10 Lore: 9/10 Great work! Not only were you able to garner excellent data, but you were even able to extract some information as to another location for investigation! I look forward to see what will come of what you gathered. Creativity: 8/10 Good Q&A with a usually fruitless SCP with exquisite form. Presentation: 8/10 Excellent formatting and presentation! Writing: 9/10 Honestly nothing to complain about other than I wished for more! Overall Notes: Superb work! Excellent conclusions were drawn, terrific information was brought to scrutiny, and it was beautifully formatted! You will go far in Research should this level of quality be maintained and even polished.
  3. Overall Grade: 5/10 Lore: 6/10 SCP-999 certainly behaves as per usual, that blob of Jell-O sure is insatiable regarding it's sweets isn't it? Creativity: 7/10 Good to see a test involving the two with good observations. Presentation: 3/10 This is still just a forums post, so -points for presentation. I understand there is something in the works to be able to "pretty up" tests, until then however, pretty bland. Additionally, not even a picture of the result? It would be nice to see supplemental media included. Writing: 4/10 Points for grammar/spelling, however, there isn't much substance to be garnered from such a short log. Overall Notes: Don't be afraid to punch out some more words and if possible try and include some form of media representation (i.e.: photos, videos, drawings, etc.). As always, I look forward to your future tests and endeavors!
  4. Overall Grade: 7.25/10 Lore: 8/10 Nice references into SCP-682's prior history and insigghts into it's own thoughts, I'm happy you were even able to have a proper discussion with the monster! Perhaps next time you can inquire on its own experiences with humanity? Creativity: 7/10 It's always good to see a non-intrusive test, especially on one such as SCP-682. Presentation: 6/10 Video logs are always welcome, however, have you given thought to formatting your logs into a doc? Writing: 8/10 Good spelling and grammar, with the supplement of the video log this is pretty good. Always feel free to add more substance to the report! Overall Notes: Great test log, really wish you would make a nice document for future logs considering this is just a forums post with a video attached. Otherwise, keep up the great work and I look forward to your future endeavors!
  5. Overall Grade: 6.75/10 Lore: X/10 Not too much lore, but this isn't exactly a lore-intensive scenario. Creativity: 8/10 I enjoyed reading some of your thought process behind the working of SCP-008's abilities, perhaps next time you could go more in depth if possible? Presentation: 8/10 Nice looking format, could do with some pictures from your test. Writing: 4/10 Decent writing, some spelling mistakes, however you carry too many run-on sentences, try and divide it up into smaller sentences. Overall Notes: Clean up your writing and compartmentalize your sentences, this was kinda fun to read and I'd like to see more of it from you. Keep up the great work!
  6. Overall Grade: 4.75/10 Lore: 3/10 While you did give a small description of the SCP itself, there isn't much in the way of substance that would add to it's lore. Creativity: 6/10 Not a bad idea to try and muffle the effects produced, but wouldn't it be easier to just avoid agitating 066? Points for being cheap and not using up all our funding. Presentation: 5/10 Easy to read and digest, it would be better if you could include photographs of the test itself. Writing: 5/10 Short and concise, albeit, with a small spelling mistake. There isn't much substance. Overall Notes: I enjoyed your observations and wish you dive in deeper into your findings. This test is a bit on the low effort side of the spectrum, but I believe you can do better and I'm hoping that your future endeavors are ever more prosperous.
  7. NOOOOOOOOOOO God Bless you Shin, I always had really great interactions with you wherever I happened to see you. Life gets busy and I'm glad you're giving yourself a chance to get out there and get at it!
  8. In Game Name: Borshk Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47613876 What's your current Rank & Branch: E11 1LT What Type of Command Position are you applying for (Senior Command / Low Command): Senior Command Date of when you first joined your branch: March of 2021? Why do you deserve the position? (50+ Words): Having established myself in E11 Command, I am of the belief that I am an excellent choice to uphold the duties and responsibilities required of me should I obtain this position. I have attended college as well as additional schooling making me qualified to not only perform exemplary grading, but also dolling out fair and just marks for my subordinates when it comes to their submissions. I understand that while MTF command has certain aspects that are not shared with their fellow research personnel, primarily that being this is indeed a non-combative branch, the aspect of being a competent command member is shared across the board in regards to being able to uphold the server, MOTD, and branch specific rules. What is your main goal of being Research Low / Senior Command (100+ Words): My main goal is to introduce more players to the joys and shenanigans of research. The branch provides a vital element of role-playing that has honestly disappeared (or at the very least, shrunk considerably) during this momentary rut in the server's life. Seeing this, I wish to interject myself and be able to provide new experiences and events that bring the entire foundation closer together by conducting and organizing numerous experiments that would involve and promote branch and cross-branch relations and morale. Receiving this position would allow me to more directly organize and execute events involving the site while providing the much needed role-playing elements that would enhance users gameplay and RP activities. Do you think there is any issues with the branch and if so how would you fix it: Aside from lack of players, it would be nice to involve Event Team more in the going-ons of the branch. Experiments and data-collection are all well and good, but involvement and interaction would attract others and benefit not only Research, but the server as a whole. Why should we accept you into Research Low / Senior Command? (150 word minimum): Using the information I have previously provided, I believe I would be the preferred choice due to my level of maturity and mental aptitude. After having established myself among the server I have proven my trustworthiness and aptitude for the role of command and the discipline required to uphold the rank and duties required of me and my peers. Aside from that, I am a easy person to work with and can even be enjoyable to be around with no users (that I know of) having ever complained about my actions or decisions in the execution of my duties. Other than that, I really do wish to improve the quality of life on the server by adding more role-playing scenarios that others can be involved and take part in regardless of branch. With this new role, I hope to be able to contribute to the server's life and propensity to be an enjoyable experience while making some new friends along the way.
  9. Name: Borshk Rank: PVT SteamID: STEAM_0:0:47613876 Discord ID (Ex. Deez #5564): Master_Fox#2967 Are you a FTO?: No Timezone: EST Would you like to remain in Military?: Yes
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  11. In Game Name: Borshk Steam ID (Ex. STEAM_0:1:91255427) STEAM_0:0:47613876 Squadron you are Applying for (Guardian, Engineer, Analyst): Guardian Current RP Ranks Held: CI LCPL, Maint. MA, Retired E11 Major and D4 (Dionysus) If applying for Guardian preferred O5 to guard: Any If applying for Analyst please link notable test-logs here: N/A How many Warns do you have? (With Screenshot Proof) 0 Why do you want to join the Red Right Hand team: I'd like to delve deeper into the server's lore and play an active role in adding onto it. The members it already consists of I have found enjoyable to be with (not excluding the rest of the server). Playing alongside other redacted members has shown a deeper element that I just haven't found on the other branches that isn't there. Why should we accept you: I am known to be a relatively chill member, if a bit mingey sometimes, but an otherwise good person to be "working" alongside with. No users have an issue with me (that they haven't addressed or shown at least). As far as doing and upholding what the job would require, there would be no problems. Having a past as a E11 Major as well as D4, I have demonstrated my abilities quite thoroughly by achieving (and holding) these privileged ranks and not abusing them.
  12. I look forward to the next time I'll see you on then, even though you'll be missed! This won't be a goodbye but a see you later!
  13. Real sad to see you go, the times you were on were always good memories for me. See you next time!
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