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  1. Grade: 23/100 Efficiency: 3/25 There is such a thing as too few and too many questions. You did not ask enough, especially considering the clearance of the personnel you had. Insight: 5/25 Three things you could have asked more about. 1, More details about the SCPs. 2, More about the members of O5. 3, More Info on RRH, and other SFs, since you had such a high level personnel. Also you didn't ask for their clearance. Presentation: 10/25 While you have your own format, it seems rather rushed, though I could be wrong. It is regardless, rather bland. Writing: 5/25 It was incredibly short, but no grammar mistakes. Safe to say, your writing was just simple. I can't give a good grade to the tiny amount of writing. Additional comment: I'll help you fix up your template Doc. Overall: F Test quality: Poor
  2. Grade: 52/100 Efficiency: 15/25 While I am all for large amounts of info, asking for the entire command tree below him is a bit much. I would recommend only going two/three below them. Insight: 10/25 You didn't ask for any details about the SF besides the name, and didn't ask for any of his fellow Majors, but other than that, not terrible. Presentation: 15/25 Your format, while custom, isn't incredibly unique, with only the intro being unique. While I give props for that, I'd like to see a little bit more. Your document is adequate. Writing: 7/25 One Described Torture, with just ID checks for the rest? Be more creative! Give it more flair! I know you can do better! Also run it through Grammarly or something, you've got a few grammar & spelling mistakes. Additional comment: Why would you shoot him at the end if he was a Major? That's good money! Overall: D- Test quality: Meets Expectations (Barely)
  3. Grade: 40/100 Overall, this was a below average document. Please make longer, more thorough documents for EOI grading, along with giving your template more personal flair. Lore: 17/25 Due to being an Event SCP, you will be receiving an average grade for Lore, however, I have seen it act like as described in the test, so I will give you a few bonus points. Creativity: 9/25 Depending on whether it was shown to be hostile if provoked before the test, your score will be altered slightly. Regardless, a single test on the state of whether it would be hostile or not isn't very creative. Presentation: 7/25 While technically your own format, there's only very small splashes of color, making it pretty boring. While the picture brings it up a little, please add more flair to your personalized Docs. Writing: 7/25 While detailed, incredibly short to the point of having actual testing being two pages. Whether you terminated it was simply due to fear of it escaping (or the event ending), it is not clear, regardless, EOI expects more through test logs. Overall: F Test quality: Approaching Expectations Extra Notes: Thank you for tagging it as an event. Also just make the page background dark gray. ~D1 Honeypot
  4. Grade: 37/100 Overall, while this is an average interrogation, it is not enough for EOI standards. Efficiency: 10/25 I would say you asked a few too many questions about Command, I would've recommended only going with the top three ranks he knows. Also I would have recommended to ask more questions about G9. Insight: 15/25 You get a good amount of the D-5 Command, and the highest member of G9. While that is sufficent, I would have recommended getting more info on G9. Presentation: 10/25 While you have a custom format, it's not particularly unique, with only the intro being made by you. Writing: 2/25 There were a few grammar mistakes, additionally you had absolutely zero detail to torture. Additional comment: Please be thorough with your tortures. Please put in more effort for EOI grading. Overall: F Test quality: Approaching Expectations Extra Notes: N/A
  5. Grade: 52/100 Lore: 15/25 Lore accurate, as he has been asked what the pestilence is on multiple occasions, but not going much farther than surface level. Creativity: 17/25 As with most 049 interviews, you asked about the Pestilence, and while you brought in another SCP, you still didn't ask anything besides the basic questions. I would recommend asking some slightly different things to 049, like the origin of the pestilence or when did he first start noticing it. You get a few bonus points for going onsite to do it. Presentation: 5/25 Barely any color, and at your level, it is advised to make your own testing format, which will be favored upon. Fixing both of those things will net you a higher grade Writing: 15/25 You were a bit through with the questions, even with the time you had. While I like you had lofty goals, I believe you are capable of obtaining more info, if you do a continuation of this test. Test quality: Meets Expectations Overall, I believe if you were given more time, you could have achieved all of your goals from your onsite testing. Extra Notes: I would be very interested to see a continuation of this testing. Sorry it took so long.
  6. Grade- 95/100 Lore- 25/25 I agree with Cogs, Dr. Wondertainment isn't used often, if at all. Additionally, adding a log of agents finding it makes it beautiful. Presentation- 25/25 An actual custom format? Color key? Dialogue formatting? You have checked all these boxes, great work. Creativity- 20/25 While the effects were very interesting, It was a very standard test. I would to have liked to see a bit more examination of the gum & packaging itself, rather than the flavor, like why it caused an explosion when everything was eaten at once. Writing- 25/25 Incredibly through taste test, detailed, perfect grammar and punctuation. Test quality overall- Exceeds expectations! Amazing work Agent, I'm sorry it took so long to get an official EOI grade.
  7. Grade: 72/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Almost every single question you got a good bit of info. Good job. Insight: 20/25 You got him to rat out his fellow HTF, and explain who he is and what he does. I would have preferred seeing what his pals ranks were, but that is sufficient. Presentation: 15/25 There wasn't really anything that made it look it was yours, but that's okay. Writing: 17/25 Writing was clean and simple, and you got straight to the point in your audio log. Additional comment: You impress me Laki. Lets hope you have more insight in the future. ~Overseer Honeypot Overall: B+ Test quality: Meets Expectations
  8. Grade: 58/100 Lore: 13/25 Though I don't think that's how indoor humidity works. Also, according to what I've read, that lake will be coming for you. Creativity: 15/25 You simply just took notes on the environment, instead of thinking of an idea of your own. Presentation: 13/25 It looks alright, but there's none of that personal flare. Writing: 17/25 there was a few grammar issues, along with that large gap in-between the two sections. Test quality: Meets Expectations Extra Notes: I would have liked to hear more about what you did to the lake, like what machines you used and what methods. ~Overseer Honeypot
  9. Name: Zachary Rank: ARCH Discord ID: EpicSteamGamer#8917 How active are you on a scale of 1-10: 4
  10. Grade: 85/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Insight: 15/25 Presentation: 25/25 Writing: 25/25 Additional comment: We'll see what we can do to get a better bunker. Some more cash inflow could help. Overall: B+ Test quality: Exceeds Expectations
  11. Grade: 93/100 Lore: 20/25 Creativity: 25/25 Presentation: 25/25 Writing: 23/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: In response to your concerns about radiation poisoning, may I suggest just making better radiation suits, perhaps using SCP materials? Also lovely log. ~ARCH Zachary
  12. Grade: 97/100 Efficiency: 22/25 Insight: 25/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 20/25 Additional comment: Great job getting so much from him. Overall: A
  13. What are you suggesting? - Moving the HCZ wardrobe, which is currently in Temp Euclid, to the Under Construction room in Misc Containment. How would this change better the server? - It would allow EOI agents to access a wardrobe in HCZ without the chance of Event Team using the room, while still being behind at least one Level 3 door. Are there any disadvantages of making this change to the server? If so, explain. - I don’t know if there are any future plans for the room. Additionally, it is a little easier to access than the current location. Who would this change mostly benefit? - EOI Please link any workshop content, screenshots, or anything that you think may be helpful to those who view this suggestion- Current Location (left) Suggested Location (right)
  14. Name: Zachary Rank: Lane DiscordID: EpicSteamGamer#8917 SteamID: STEAM_0:1:203269622 What is your Activity? Piss poor, 2/10 What can be improved in R&D?: Me being active so I do things.
  15. Grade: 80/100 Lore: 20/25 Creativity: 15/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 25/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: I'd suggest a follow up, where you see exactly how much of the concoction is controllable.
  16. Grade: 65/100 Efficiency: 25/25 Insight: 10/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 15/25 Additional comment: See me after class. Overall: B- Test quality: [65%: Meets Expectations] Extra Notes: How in the hell did the higher branches let you do the interrogation of such a profile? None the less, Excellent Work, Although your Lie Detection Skills could use a little work. Also, the document could be spruced up a bit, Give it your own personal flair!
  17. Took the words out of my mouth. Every time I've been own, so as he. He deserves this spot for all the work he's done for this branch. Definite +Support
  18. +Support He is one of the oldest command members still around from when Neo was still here. He's seen the point where we were a fucking sub-branch, not even full. Yes, he could be a bit more active, but the same goes for the previous member who resigned. He could absolutely pump life into RnD.
  19. Grade: 93/100 Lore: 20/25 Creativity: 25/25 Presentation: 25/25 Writing: 23/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expectations Extra Notes: Never forget to pack bring an extra military when testing! Love the pictures added. ~IIN Zachary
  20. "God Dammit, It wasn't supposed to go this way!" -Bain, PAYDAY 2 Gentlemen, I'm sorry I failed you. I tried. But I need to grow, and that requires cutting some ties, so this is goodbye, I might see you on the other side, when I've grown and matured, but for now, Sayonara. I want to shout-out everyone that believed in me till the end. All 8 of you. Vinder: You were the best to...wait, where did you..go? I see... I'll miss you. Apple: You've got the skills to go CDOR, so why don't you...You Did it, you made it, you made it you crazy son a bitch you did it! Atlas: You are gonna go far, so long as you don't give up. Yohan: I hope everything is going fine in your life, Yohan. Protege: You crazy ass minge, you were the best. Loki: I will see the day you rise to the top, for you have glorious purpose. Baker and Cadente: You both have the skills, will power, and abilites, to become DDODs. Command are my pals, no, my family. You are my family. So I will leave a parting gift to some. So if you see something from me, just know you are special to me. ~SIN Zachary
  21. Grade: 90/100 Lore: 22/25 Creativity: 22/25 Presentation: 23/25 Writing: 23/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expecations Extra Notes: N/A
  22. **Testing Grade Format:** Grade: 73/100 Lore: 20/25 Creativity: 18/25 Presentation: 18/25 Writing: 17/25 Test quality: Meets Expecations Extra Notes: Please keep the file type to Google Doc if Possible. Also, there is a lot of blank space, if you could remove that would be appreciated. I believe in you. -CI Buffoon
  23. **Testing Grade Format:** Grade: 90/100 Lore: 23/25 Creativity: 22/25 Presentation: 23/25 Writing: 22/25 Test quality: Exceeds Expecations Extra Notes: Good job on improving your tests! The only thing I can add is maybe give the report template itself your own personal flair. -CI Buffoon
  24. Grade: 72/100 Lore: 25/25 Creativity: 12/25 Presentation: 20/25 Writing: 15/25 Test quality: Meets Expectations Extra Notes: The CI Delta Command would like to remind you that chemicals are fucking expensive. Please do not splash large amounts onto SCPs. The CI Delta Command would also like to remind you to add some color and creativity to your test logs. Termination attempts are not super creative (Execpt on 682, Go nuts for that.) -CI Buffoon
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