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  1. Unofficial Scoring System Total: 20/25 | B Creativity: 5/5 | Offsite SCPs are rare, its good to be re-exposed to ones I am not completely familiar with. Usefulness: 4/5 | Can be useful as a food supply for D-class in case of a supplies shortage. Writing: 4/5 | Some grammatical errors and confusing sentences. Presentation: 4/5 | All the text being bold is kind of distracting. Realism: 3/5 | Not sure how seeds from 038 would turn someone into a plant. If you have any questions about your test score do not hesitate to contact the MRS or the MRM.
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    SCP-999 Test

    Unofficial Scoring System Total: 22/25 | A Creativity: 4/5 | A good test that better shows the usefulness of 999. This is not something that is usually tested with 999. Usefulness: 5/5 | Useful on many occasions, good to know that samples of SCP-999s jelly have slightly less of an effect than SCP-999 itself. Writing: 3/5 | Some grammatical/spelling errors. Presentation: 5/5 | Looks good and is easy to read. Realism: 5/5 | A perfectly reasonable result. If you have any questions about your test score do not hesitate to contact the MRS or the MRM.
  3. Unofficial Scoring System Total: 24/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Amnestic tests are very rare. Its nice to see one. Usefulness: 5/5 | Knowing how chemicals work together is always important. Especially with how much we use amnestics. Writing: 5/5 | Minimal gramatical/spelling errors Presentation: 5/5 | Easy to look at and read. Realism: 4/5 | Class-C amnestics are an implant that allows the removal of specific memories. I am unsure how this would result in the removal of all recent memories when combined with the Class-G variant. If you have any questions about your score please do not hesitate to contact me.
  4. Name: Peters Rank(s): Medical Manager, Maintenance Professional, & E11 MSGT. Duration: 12/20/2020 - 12/27/2020 Reason: Recently I have made some mistakes in real life and I need some time to figure out how I am going to handle the results. This is going to be a rough few weeks for me and I will keep all of my command members updated with the status of my LOA. I will still be completing what duties I can in discord, on the fourms, and in TeamSpeak. Hopefully I can get through this soon so I can get back to being active.
  5. *Produces a manila envelope from a drawer and dusts off an old lvl 05 access card* Unofficial Scoring System Total: 22/25 | A Originality: 5/5 | Never seen this tested before, very creative. Usefulness: 2/5 | Not really sure how this is useful to the medical branch. Writing: 5/5 | Spelling and grammar is all there, I would like to see more of a conclusion in the future however. Presentation: 5/5 | Easy to look at and read, the images are a nice touch. Realism: 5/5 | While your findings on the way 096's jaw separates is different from how it is traditionally depicted, this is entirely possible as no living individual has ever seen its face. Notes: A very good test overall. Next time I would try to keep it in the realm of medical research, you can look at the MR SOP for details. If you have any questions about your score, please do not hesitate to contact me.
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    SCP-1025 Test

    Unofficial Scoring System Total: 21/25 | A Creativity: 4/5 | Good idea, medical testing with regenerative cancer has not been done much. Usefulness: 3/5 | Not a very useful experiment. It would be better if we had any information on how to use the regenerative cancer to our advantage. Writing: 5/5 | Minimal grammar/spelling mistakes. Presentation: 5/5 | Looks good and is easy to read. Realism: 4/5 | In real life cancer doesn't spread between people. Cancer is a defect within the DNA of a cell, causing it to replicate uncontrollably. However this may be a special case as it does come from an SCP and has a different nature. Notes: Good test log! I hope testing does continue with this idea stream, I think a lot of good discoveries could come from it. If you have any questions about your test grade please do not hesitate to contact me.
  7. + Support Professional Respectful Responsible Dedicated Fun to be around Good at RP Pills is an amazing member of Maintenance and I have enjoyed every interaction I have had with them in both CI and in Utility. Pills has recently joined ET and has used that as an opportunity to show their dedication and creativity in RP situations. He is fun to be around but knows when things need to be serious, he has done great things in command and I believe he will do great things in O5 Logistics too. I hope to see this man on the job soon. -Former OM1 Therm
  8. Unofficial Scoring System Total: 23/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Offsite SCPs are rare, I have not come across SCP-195 before now. Usefulness: 3/5 | Useful in a very specific situation. Writing: 5/5 | Minimal grammatical errors. Presentation: 5/5 | Easy to read and follow. Realism: 5/5 | Everything happened pretty much as one would expect. Notes: Standard restraint protocols will remain in use to avoid running out of SCP-500. Another good test! Thank you for exposing me to a new SCP. If you have any questions about your test score, please feel free to ask.
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    SCP 914 Test

    Unofficial Grading System Total: 23/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | A good medical twist on a test with SCP-914. Usefulness: 4/5 | Could be useful in the case of a shortage of d-class or for testing the concepts of clones. Writing: 5/5 | Minimal errors. Presentation: 5/5 | I like the simple variations in the formatting. It's easy to read and not too distracting. Realism: 4/5 | As SCP-914 is a machine it would likely react the same way to the same input. Notes: I appreciate the name of the google doc. Good job on your first test log! If you have any questions about your test grade, please feel free to ask.
  10. *Produces a manila envelope from a drawer and dusts off an old lvl 05 access card* Unofficial Grading System Total: 20/25 | B Creativity: 5/5 | Offsite SCPs are rare and the usage of bacteriophages is a nice touch. Usefulness: 4/5 | Having a way to effectively fight SCP-1121 is a great resource, but it would be nicer to have a solution to the seizures. Writing: 3/5 | Poor wording choices in multiple places. I would like to see more of the format used. Specify what type of file is used in the addendum; Document or audio log. Presentation: 4/5 | Would like more formatting like the preface and the picture subtitle could be formatted to appear like a subtitle. The usage of headings/Table of Contents should be considered. Realism: 4/5 | Anti-Amnestics are known as mnestics (W-Z) Notes: Keep up the good work. Contact me if you wish for harsher gradings. Harsher grading has been given per request. If you have any questions about your test grade, please feel free to ask.
  11. Unofficial Scoring System Total: 21/25 | A Creativity: 3/5 | Using SCP-999 to stimulate healing has been done before, and only one test is done with it. Usefulness: 5/5 | Having a way to stimulate healing past what is normally possible is great for all of medical. Writing: 4/5 | Minimal grammatical errors. Would like to see more detail of the procedure. Presentation: 4/5 | Good use of spacing, would like to see it in a google doc or with some color though. Realism: 5/5 | SCP-999 as a healing stimulant works in lore theoretically and in practice consistently. Notes: Would be good to know if the rate of healing is impacted by the type of wound, location of injection or amount of 999 jelly injected. Good job for a first test, I look forward to seeing you grow in medical science! If you have any questions about your test grade, please feel free to ask.
  12. + Always does good RP + Knows how to prioritize a situation. +Support
  13. *Produces a manila envelope from a drawer and dusts off an old lvl 05 access card* Unofficial Grading System Total: 22/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Never seen anyone attempt to identify the materials that make up SCP-500. Usefulness: 4/5 | Being able to synthetically duplicate SCP-500 would be a massive leap in medical science. However, as part of the formula are unable to be recreated and others have been redacted, the project must be placed on hold. Writing: 4/5 | Some sections could have been worded better but grammatically everything looks fine. Presentation: 5/5 | Easy to read and the format keeps a common theme throughout. Realism: 4/5 | Anomalously the report makes sense, but the ingredients that allow pills to dissolve in the stomach, as well as the coating, are not listed. Notes: Interesting how you knew what it was that you didn't know. Also that was a good first test, keep up the good work. If you have any questions about your test grade, please feel free to ask.
  14. + Support A great medic in and around medbay. He really put himself out there, brownie points for that. Focused on the Medic in ACM.
  15. Unofficial Grading System: Total: 22/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Tests done without an SCP are rare, this was well done. Usefulness: 5/5 | Analyzing all new viruses before they become a threat is incredibly important for medical. Writing: 4/5 | The entire observation section had no periods. Other than that, everything looked pretty good. Presentation: 3/5 | Would like to see this in a google doc or with some color. Realism: 5/5 | The nature of the virus was not fully analyzed yet, however viruses spreading from animals is a proven occurrence. I would like to see more on what the full scope of the virus is. Notes: Testing on the nature of the virus should be continued. See your SCP-999 Jelly test for information on how to post medical tests.
  16. Unofficial Grading System: Total: 18/25 | B Creativity: 2/5 | SCP-999 gel as a healing supplement has been tested many times (even by yourself before). Usefulness: 5/5 | Having SCP-999 as a source of healing supplementation is an extremely useful ability Writing: 3/5 | A very short log, some grammatical and spelling errors. Presentation: 3/5 | I would like to see the log in a google doc if possible, or just with some color in it. Realism: 5/5 | This healing factor is completely in the realm of possibility for SCP-999. Notes: You listed this as a medical science test. In the future go to: Foundation > Utility > Medical | and post your test there while following the medical format provided. A good first medical test log.
  17. *Produces a manila envelope from a drawer and dusts off an old lvl 05 access card* Unofficial Grading System: Total: 24/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Offsite SCPs are rare, I have never seen a test with SCP-2295 before. Usefulness: 5/5 | By removing organs created by SCP-2295, the foundation can create and send organs to sites where they are needed without having to worry about moving the SCP or matching the blood type of the donor. Writing: 4/5 | Minor Grammatical Errors Presentation: 5/5 | Simple design and formatting, very easy to read. Realism: 5/5 | Due to the anomalous nature of the donated organs, I believe this is entirely within the realm of possibility. Notes: Good idea, I had never heard about this SCP until reading this test log.
  18. Unofficial Grading System: Total: 23/25 | A Creativity: 5/5 | Offsite SCP tests are rare, and I have never seen a SCP-427 test before. Usefulness: 4/5 | Useful to cure many ailments incase of limited SCP-500 availability but limited in its own availability as well. The dangers of an SCP-427-1 instance must also be considered. Writing: 4/5 | Minor grammatical errors. Presentation: 5/5 | Format looks good and is easy to read. Realism: 5/5 | All recorded results align with the nature of the SCP. Notes: I wonder what would happen if a cup of "Life" from SCP-294 was placed into SCP-914 on the "fine" setting, would we have a similar concept?
  19. + Support Dedicated to the task at hand. Great in a fight. Respectful to those who need assistance.
  20. Unofficial Grading System: Total: 23/25 | A Creativity: 4/5 | SCP-294-1 "LIFE" being used to cure various diseases/afflictions is a common usage of the machine. Usage on SCP-008 however, is less common. Usefulness: 5/5 | The only other known cure for SCP-008 is SCP-500. Anything to save usage of SCP-500 is good in my book. Writing: 4/5 | Some minor grammatical errors. Presentation: 5/5 | Simple and easy to read. Good use of formatting. Realism: 5/5 | With the effects of "life" on other diseases I would expect this to work as described. Notes: Approval for the usage of SCP-294-1 "LIFE" as an emergency medicine for SCP-008 is pending more testing on the effectiveness and administration at later stages of infection. You used the term "short term cure" in your request. Is there reason to believe that SCP-008 would return in the subject if given a longer period of time?
  21. Crystal, you showed me so much of medical and you have set a great example to the whole branch. Stay safe, have fun, and always do what makes you happy. See you around!
  22. + Support Active An amazing person who really puts effort into everything they do. Good in a fight Is Fireman
  23. Squash, it has been fun and I have always enjoyed escorting you! I know sometimes the novelty of things fade but the experiences we have never leave us. Keep doing amazing work! I will see you around the facility!
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