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  1. Fantastic job!
    I like the way the document looks! Pictures were included too.
    I like the test idea. I've never seen it done before, and it follows lore well.
    I spotted minor errors within the document that could've been avoided from a re-reading.
    The document has a nice length to it too. You truly did a good job!

  2. Nice job!
    I spotted grammatical and spelling errors within the document.
    I like the coloring and font. Pictures could be used.
    You don't strictly have to follow the default format, you can slightly change it by adding things or removing things.
    This log follows lore well. SCP-076-2 would terminate all instances of SCP-5208.
    I believe more detail could've been added to your observations. Instead of pasting the link for your background research, you could always try and make a page similar to the one on the wiki (rewording it or citing it).
    The test log has a decent length to it. It could've been extended if you added more detail.
    If you improve on what's listed above, you could make an even better logging of the test.

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  3. Nice job!
    I spotted some grammatical / spelling errors within the document.
    There are no colors or pictures provided. They make your document look better for people who read them.
    The log has a decent length to it. I would love to read more.
    You used a lot of SCP-500! Now I can't use a pill every time I get [DATA EXPUNGED].
    Good job though. I hope to see more logs like this in the near future!

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  4. I like this test, however I've seen it done before.
    The log has a decent length to it, and I spotted no grammatical / spelling errors within it.
    I would not recommend bring ten individual Class-D to SCP-1025. It may seem like you are killing Class-D for no reason whatsoever.
    There are no pictures or colors in the document. Adding some in the future would make your log nicer overall.
    Nice job! Improve on above in the future, and you'll make nice logs.

  5. This log needs a lot of work.
    I spotted grammatical / spelling errors within the document.
    It has no real formatting. Some colors and pictures would be nice.
    The log has a very short length to it, and I believe more detail could've been added to it.
    You didn't follow any formats either. I would recommend following the one found HERE in the future.

  6. Nice job!
    I spotted minor grammatical issues within the document, and I spotted no spelling errors. Nice job!
    Good job on including pictures! The formatting looks nice too.
    The test idea is very creative! I hope to see more tests like this in the future.
    This is a very nice log, and I hope to see more.

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  7. This test log really needs improvement!
    "Researcher Shark" is not background Research. Just bringing Class-D to SCP-012 is not really a test either. We both know what it will do.
    You should not be putting fellow Researchers near Cognitive hazards either. That isn't safe, and it took the life of another Researcher.
    This test log is extremely short! It has no detail, and it has no formatting or pictures. If you take more time, it could look a lot nicer.
    This is not a creative test. It takes little to no brain power to think of a test like this.
    Overall, if these are fixed, you will make a nice log.

  8. Good job!
    This log lacks on the following: Creativity, length, details, and formatting (pictures, colors, etc.)
    I spotted some grammatical / spelling errors within the document.
    Overall, if you can improve on what I listed above, you will be able to write a fantastic document!

  9. Nicely done!
    This follows lore extremely well, and it would be accurate if it were to happen in the real life (to my belief).
    The test has a nice length to it. I spotted no grammatical / spelling errors either!
    The document looks rather nice. It looks like a laminated type of paper.
    Overall, you did a fantastic job with this log! I hope to see more like this in the near future.

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  10. 1 minute ago, Gunther said:

    -/+Support leaning towards -Support. Its a day ban, by the time Rookie get around to this, it will already be done with. Also, he was spawning props 3 times as a D-Class, and then after being jailed, went back to doing it. Obviously being jailed didn't make an impact because he broke the same exact rule.

    The ban was already revoked. No further discussion is needed.

  11. 1 minute ago, Warro said:

    I gave him an verbal then an formal+jail then he got banned

     

    Only two warnings were issued. Three should've been given out. In this case, two formal warnings, and 1 verbal.
    The ban is only a day long. I do believe that @Warro should use this as a learning experience.

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  12. 10 minutes ago, Warro said:

    I only have to warn once the other stuff is jails and then ban

     

    You have to warn them again for jails and bans. Also, you are not supposed to  jail for more then 300 seconds.

  13. We're no strangers to love
    You know the rules and so do I
    A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
    You wouldn't get this from any other guy

    I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
    Gotta make you understand

    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

    We've known each other for so long
    Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
    Inside we both know what's been going on
    We know the game and we're gonna play it

    And if you ask me how I'm feeling
    Don't tell me you're too blind to see

    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

    Never gonna give, never gonna give
    (Give you up)
    (Ooh) Never gonna give, never gonna give
    (Give you up)

    We've known each other for so long
    Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
    Inside we both know what's been going on
    We know the game and we're gonna play it

    I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
    Gotta make you understand

    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry
    Never gonna say goodbye
    Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
    Never gonna give you up
    Never gonna let you down
    Never gonna run around and desert you
    Never gonna make you cry

  14. This is an amazing test log!
    I like how it looks somewhat like a CI R&D test log! Great job!
    I spotted no grammatical / spelling errors within the document.
    The test log has an AMAZING length to it!
    I've seen this test done multiple times, however this log went into amazing length!

    You did a fantastic job on this log! I hope to see more logs like this in the future!

  15. This test is rather decent.
    It has a decent length. Formatting (colors, bold, italics, etc.) would be appreciated along with pictures.
    This does not follow lore too well. SCP-049-2 lack any brain functions other than simple movement and attacking. When they view humans, they get an adrenaline rush and attack the human.
    This log wouldn't help the foundation either as this is already known by the foundation.
    I spotted minor grammatical / spelling errors within the document, and I believe they could easily be fixed.
    This test log would be somewhat creative, if it was never done / known in the past.

    Overall, this test log could use a lot of improvement.

  16. Nice job! I really like this test!
    It's nice to see how SCP-999 would react to fireworks, and I've never seen this test done before. Good Job!
    The document has a very nice length to it, and I spotted little to no grammatical errors within the document.
    The formatting is rather nice. Pictures were included.

    Good job though, and happy 4th!
    (Super Late)

  17. Nice job!
    I like this Incident Report, Modeus.
    Overall though, I spotted minor grammatical / spelling errors within the document.
    The document has a pretty short length, and it is padded down by the formatting.
    Some pictures other then the Memetic Kill Agent could be added to the document.

    Bye bye, LR Mateo! Hello, LR Modeus!

  18. This is one of the best test logs I've seen from Enlisted researchers.
    The test log has decent length to it, and it has very nice formatting. Pictures are included as well.
    I spotted no grammatical / spelling errors within the test log.
    I like the test idea. It is very creative, and I have not seen it done yet at all!
    The background research could be re-written though. I would recommend you credit your sources.

    Overall, you did a fantastic job on this log!

  19. Amazing job!
    This test log has a decent length to it. A lot of grammatical errors and spelling errors were spotted throughout the document.
    Class-D Personnel are typically given a 4 number identification i.e. D-9341.
    The test idea is rather creative, and I have not seen a test done like this one.

    Overall, you did a fantastic job on this log!

  20. You did a fantastic job on this log!
    I spotted little to no grammatical and spelling errors. The log has a nice length to it.
    Formatting could've been used. It would be nice to see colors, pictures, etc. in your future test logs.
    I like the idea of figuring out why SCP-343 chooses to stay within the foundation.

    Overall, you did an amazing job! I'd like to see more logs like this in the future!

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