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  1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tR23OUf2fJC-pRqiB_67i2vcbQdCITRahV4S1T7UndU/edit?usp=sharing
  2. I'd like to know what's wrong specifically with format and presentation so that I can do better in the future, numbers aren't helpful if I don't know what caused them
  3. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C0KjoGrMdKr3sGK1JKY9HH-YiSbvpnFao7SbSJ1Zwek/edit?usp=sharing
  4. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K0UWXDBsBAXttKRQ_uiIaoM_vAaKkuqVCOnLudLtXO8/edit?usp=sharing
  5. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1acqVs3_3SzQPkWViJITht27K3ayF34uHEDCeEBRSYeg/edit?usp=sharing
  6. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l2c4mvhZzRFJCiZ0EJxDpIPlvWb9FiMaFk6q5o247kY/edit?usp=sharing
  7. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LX1X_8lcw_Wi0fmPFqFHWUt_iCVcnshN5iacwdy4O-w/edit?usp=sharing
  8. 9.5/10 Great story, great description Minor spelling errors and at the start you identify yourself as Advanced but later you state you are an SR Overall great document good job.
  9. 4.5/10 Good idea, effort was put in It seems like with the "under 300 milliseconds" line being used twice you wanted your prediction to be spot on which is not always fun for a test. There also is next to no detail, if the D class punched while looking at it why did it attack him if he didn't close his eyes. 173 doesn't choose not to move it cannot move if being looked at and it's not explained how the D class did not look at it. Circling back to the 300 milliseconds line the average human reaction time is 250 milliseconds aka a quarter of a second and the fastest recorded (of visual stimuli) is 120 milliseconds. So while saying under 300 is not outright wrong you do not specify it as actually being faster. I know I might seem to be a bit to critical in this review but the reason for that is because I want to see good test logs put out. If you want help in writing test logs I'm always happy to help people and show them how to improve their logs. As far as this it would've taken a little bit more creativity put into the observations including how the D class closed his eyes or looked away allowing 173 to snap his neck as well as doing a bit of light research to ensure that the speed you put was indeed faster than humans can react. If you ever want help my DMs are always open on discord, Leviathan#2824.
  10. 6.5/10 Good story and lore accuracy Didn't follow the standard format, We have no idea what the purpose of this test was and seems like just to cause a breach, idk how guards lining up would prevent their deaths, Bulletproof glass is very resistant to high pitch sounds as a high pitch sound would be distributed across the glass as it does with the force of a bullet. Good Idea but with more context and fixing some plot holes and minor grammatical mistakes it would be a lot better.
  11. 3/10 Really cool idea, Nice to see a test log where the hypothesis was wrong Lack of a description of events. Incomplete sentences. Overall general lack of effort put into it. Remember just because this one has a low grade doesn't mean you can't improve. If you'd like you can reach out to myself or any SR or LR to help you improve your test logs.
  12. 9/10 Great Log, well written 0 grammatical or spelling errors Not sure if 155 could burn itself up but it would definitely be capable of the connections being destroyed due to overheating, not sure if the whole thing could just melt
  13. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HCPyNQuRSI_Io1X69Xx_a0RnNq2yuz9ToZSNJ8dOIz8/edit?usp=sharing
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