TheBrigand

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  1. +Support Take pity on the poor boy!
  2. Don't think command is really a super good use of my time rn - Good luck to the rest of command!
  3. Grade: A- (90%) Test Quality: Quality Lore: 20/20 You described the SCP well. Creativity: 15/20 This is a relatively creative test idea Presentation: 20/20 You included visual evidence and formatted the log to improve the presentation. Writing: 35/40 A couple errors throughout the log. "The subject made it threw twelve pages " Final Thoughts: You put some effort into your presentation and your log. Next time just proofread it a bit better. Other than that I have no problems with this log. Good job!
  4. Grade: B (85%) Test Quality: Quality Lore: 15/20 Didn't describe the SCP at all - just wrote that "I did background research" Creativity: 20/20 This is a very creative test idea! Presentation: 17/20 Included a results log which I like - However, it could have been a bit better formatted - Perhaps put into a table or something. Otherwise, there was nothing done to enhance the presentation. Writing: 33/40 There isn't much writing in this log, however, your result section has several spelling errors and grammatical errors. "SCP could prefer sweet foods over non sweet foods sense it could uses them for Endorphin production" Final Thoughts: I really like this test idea. I think next time you just need to proofread your log and maybe add a bit to the presentation. Otherwise, this is a good job.
  5. Grade: B- (84%) Test Quality: Standard Lore: 20/20 You described both SCPs involved well Creativity: 20/20 This is a very creative test idea! Presentation: 15/20 Nothing done to enhance the presentation. Writing: 29/40 "After 049 regain concussions we took him to the site med bay and gave him a cheek up and wipe his minds." Final Thoughts: Overall, I liked your idea. You just need to put a bit more effort into your writing and presentation - Otherwise, this is a good test.
  6. Grade: B- (84%) Test Quality: Standard Lore: 20/20 Nothing wrong here - You described the background of the SCP well. Creativity: 10/20 Not a very creative test idea - Just feeding D Class to SCPs Presentation: 17/20 For a forum post - Nicely formatted and you used text color to enhance the presentation - Otherwise, there was no visual evidence or anything else done to Writing: 37/40 There were several minor grammatical errors, but overall, nothing major. Final Thoughts: I think this is a pretty good test to start with - Next time I would recommend trying to come up with a bit more of a creative idea. But you clearly know how to write a decent log and you followed the format.
  7. Grade: A+ (100%) Test Quality: Quality+ Lore: 20/20 Extremely well written and describes both SCPs well and in-depth. Creativity: 20/20 This is a very creative test idea! Presentation: 20/20 One of the best formats I've ever seen - Very good job. Writing: 40/40 Well written and I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors Final Thoughts: Easily one of the best test logs I have ever graded - Keep up the good work!
  8. That one time when I killed a gensec
  9. +support I spent over 300 dollars on these knives. (I bought a couple of them twice so I have spares) and to see the damage of the knives reduced to 10 is really shocking!
  10. Hello all! Some of you may have already heard about or witnessed first hand the might of the D Block Italian Mob. To honor the creation of the new D Class section of the Forums, I thought I would post a little information section about our humble organization. SOP: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Dkyc7Lr_jPtI_evBwuSot93mHIlXtGE8I0MeU-tBKnI/edit?usp=sharing Roster: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1vi6WF_DqkrSE4RvSaVNCnzroBCLWfUyzGu5nLKPvBvk/edit?usp=sharing How Can YOU Join the Mob? There are several ways that one can go about joining "da mob". Firstly, be active on D Class. This is a minimum requirement. If you're not active at all on D Class, don't bother, you won't be kept on. The best way to join da mob is to attend an in-person interview which are infrequently held in the D Block showers. An announcement will be made in [OOC] chat when these interviews occur. If you are active on D Class and get noticed by one of our recruiters, you may be extended an offer to join. If you are really interested in joining and don't want to wait for an interview to occur, you may apply on the forums using the following format: Title: [YourName]'s Italian Mafia Application Why do you want to join the mob? What can you offer the mob? Got a custom class? How active are you on D Class? (Garbage applications will be ignored)
  11. Grade: A- (92%) Test Quality: Quality Lore: 15/20 Good background section - Would have liked to see a physical description of the SCP however and perhaps some lore history of the SCP Creativity: 20/20 This is a very creative test idea! Presentation: 20/20 Very nicely formatted and you included a video which is always a big plus Writing: 37/40 A couple minor spelling and grammatical errors, but overall, written very nicely. Final Thoughts: I think this is a really great test! The idea is original and it is very well presented. Next time it would be great if you added a bit more info on the SCP, but otherwise, I really like this log! You have a bright future in research.
  12. Grade: B (85%) Test Quality: Quality Lore: 20/20 Nothing wrong here. You described the SCP well. Would have been nice to see a physical description however. Creativity: 10/20 Not a very creative test. Just feeding D-Class to the SCP Presentation: 20/20 Some changes added to enhance presentation. Neat and orderly. Writing: 35/40 Not great grammar but no spelling errors. Final Thoughts: I think this is a very good first test! I would love to see your next test with a bit more of a creative question though. Keep up the good work!