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  1. Please note that SCP-2295 does not exist on Gaminglight SCP RP. Sgt Oppenheimer does not exist and was only recorded for this test log https://docs.google.com/document/d/198_TpZGSqbVNAutYV0HXvI3mGbq0r9Vq9rEdKiac--w/edit?usp=sharing
  2. Keter (95%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 09/10 Writing Firstly, I would like to apologize for how lojg this took to grade. This us a beautiful test log on a scp that we don't see many tests about. I enjoy rhe opening and am a big fan of the font you used here. The test and log itself was concise. I only saw minimal grammatical errors but other that that great job.
  3. Name: Carrotd Rank: AIN Discord ID: Carrots#6011 How active are you on a scale of 1-10: 5v[Work schedule changing so perhaps I can get on more ^^
  4. Please acknowledge that this document was written with fake people to support the test idea behind the log. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JzIAkuOoOzKcgmTEJp2j3q3X2b2S-7fzhkwzJY-KDUw/edit?usp=sharing
  5. Keter (100%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 10/10 Writing 10/10 I really enjoyed the intro to this test log, it draws the reader in and makes them want to read more. Reviewing the test log, the formst is well rounded, I didn't see any grammatical errors, and I enjoyed the photos well placed at the end. Good job
  6. Euclid (83%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 8/10 Writing 05/10 I love the idea behind the test log. This brings in question if 513 can be used to protect people from 106. This though may not he the case if 106 can freely enter his pocket dimension and of course this would cause the dame affect to whoever hears the ring of 513. All though the test idea was great there is inconsistencies within your grammar and little background info about both 513 and 106.
  7. Grade: /100 Efficiency: 25/25 Insight: 25/25 Presentation: 25/25 Writing: 20/25 Got what ya needed to get out from thie man, some changes with grammatical parallel so -5 to writing
  8. EUCLID (80%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 8/10 Writing 04/10 Reviewing this test log it felt incomplete. There was little background information, inconsistencies within the writing, and was missing some things that each test log should have. Overall the test idea was a great idea but the document could be better.
  9. Grade: 93/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Able to get some info vut not all. Insight: 25/25 We didn't get much insight over the agent but finding out operation Blue Sky is quite nice, good job. Presentation: 25/25 It looked nice and was easy to read Writing: 22/25 Inconsistencies with grammar Grade: 93/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Able to get some info vut not all. Insight: 25/25 We didn't get much insight over the agent but finding out operation Blue Sky is quite nice, good job. Presentation: 25/25 It looked nice and was easy to read Writing: 22/25 Inconsistencies with grammar
  10. RAGNAROCK (100%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 10/10 Writing 10/10 Reviewing this test log I saw no errors or mistakes. This test idea was quite questionable with a surprising outcome. Perhaps try this with a regular piece of candy instead of SCP-330 and see if you have the same results.
  11. KETER (83%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 07/10 Typography 08/10 Writing 10/10 A standard test log. I won't lie, I was curious to see the results myself and had my own ideas. There is not much creativity in the presentation for the log but I d9 like how you included pictures. There was 2 points removed for minor grammatical errors but other than that this test log wasn't bad.
  12. What are you suggesting? - SCPs are not allowed to kill or harm other SCPs at anytime, with the exception of cross tests and events. Add with the exception of 7598 [CI Dog] and 7101 [Enoch] attacking eachother. How would this change better the server? - This adds more purpose to the scps, balances both branches and overall just makes sense. Are there any disadvantages of making this change to the server? If so, explain. - The disadvantage of this Is that battles will quicken, but that creates its own advantages. Who would this change mostly benefit? - The two that would benefit is CI and MTF, allowing the scp portion of their branch to get more involved and be more useful when they are truly needed. Please link any workshop content, screenshots, or anything that you think may be helpful to those who view this suggestion - N/A
  13. 7/10 Overall, reason being: I'm hooked on a story that I don't even know how, when, where, or why it started. I don't have any other sections other than an overall due to it being a really short post with an odd amount of work put in to it, but I'm giving it a rather high grade due to me expecting a series of documents coming from this. Keep working on awesome stuff like this, and DEFINITELY make this a series of documents, it has potential. -RAM Salvadore
  14. KETER (86) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 10/10 Writing 5/10 First of all this test log looks really nice and I didn't see any errors. I don't think 049 has the required tools or would share what the pestilence is with another as already concluded in the past but there was no points taken for that. There was no background research revolving 049 or 049-02 so 5 points in writing were removed.
  15. RAGNAROCK (100%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 10/10 Writing 10/10 I haven't seen anyone try and find out where any scps originated from, at least within a test document. Supporting factors of your theory is that SCP-939 doesn't so well with bright lights, supporting the face that it probably lived in a dark area such as a cave.
  16. RAGNAROCK (91%) Creativity 11/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 08/10 Writing 10/10 Safety 2/5 Wow. Being the first time seeing you I am impressed. 079 is a very uncommon SCP that is tested upon but this was amazing to see. This test was unique and a pleasure to review. There was some issues of consistency with periods being In places and then not but other than that I viewd no other grammatical mistakes. I did add and take away Safety points, seeing how there was a kill switch involved but the R.I.G. unit's weapons were not removed, possibly putting foundation personnel lives at risk. -Carrrots
  17. RAGNAROCK (95 %) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 10/10 Writing 8/10 I have to say I love the way this test log opened up. I have yet to hear of a test of this kind so it was creative and beneficial to the foundation. I saw no grammatical errors so no points were deducted upon typography. I would have liked to see more info over scp-173 but other than that this was well put together. -Carrrots
  18. RAGNAROCK (95%) Creativity 10/10 Presentation 10/10 Typography 8/10 Writing 10/10 Being my first test log that I have reviewed from you, I was impressed on what I opened up to. I love the idea of the SCP, its unique and something that I haven't seen before. Many people may say that the test log is a bit short, but I think it covers all the right areas and leaves you in thought over what you just read. Other than a few grammatical errors I spotted, there wasn't anything bad to say. I look forward to reviewing more of your work. -Carrots
  19. Name: Carrots SteamID: STEAM_0:1:174399337 Current Rank: Senior Researcher. Time in Research (Estimate): I have been on and off in research, but I rejoined on May 11th, 2022. Why do you believe you should be in Research Command? I believe I should be in Research Command because Research has always been my home. I first joined the server playing within Research and Gensec, came back to playing Research and CI Military, then now I have come back playing Research and CI RnD. I have always enjoyed the research division and still do, and I personally would like to take the next step and progress within the division. Within doing so I can offer my own advice, help continue its growth, and be able to do more for everyone in and possibly outside of the division, taking a step to do more with other branches like medical, maintenance, and even CI. What can you bring to the table that others can't?: I personally can offer command experience, being put in positions like this within different servers. Within my high command experience in both Military RP and Clone Wars RP I have learned how to effectively run and help run a branch. With these opportunities I have had in the past, I have learned how to communicate and work well with a team, build ideas and documents from scratch, and even have become decently skilled with google sheets from the design process to some of the coding that has made a lot of things easier. If further details about the experience listed above is needed I would be happy to go into detail but other than offering experience I can offer my own thoughts and ideas. It is always nice to have different point of views and ideas floating around which I am always available for regardless if I'll get the position or not. What would you do to better Research and increase activity: As of now I have two plans to better the Research division and increase activity. Firstly I would like to start doing earlier and later mass tests. Listening to some complaints of other Researchers and going along with my personal experiences, there are events that make it hard for many researchers to attend our events because of their schedule. Offering these different tests times will have more people engage within Research and offer promotions which allows people to explore new things within our division, increasing activity on its own. Secondly, I would like to bring back weekly test challenges. This is something that used to happen when I first started playing on the server but I haven't seen it since. This encouraged people to do tests and write test documents over a specific SCP or a specific cross-test between SCPs. The prize was 50k, which I'd be willing to put down or even increase the prize money to 100k if that would make these tests apply to more people.
  20. What are you suggesting? - I am suggesting that people may have the ability to have a third life if they get permission from a member of command in the branch they are trying to join. How would this change better the server? - Some players can't handle 3 lives and I understand that but just because some can't doesn't mean we should limit everyone. Getting approval from a member of command will ensure that slots aren't just filled up with dead members and that people who are wanting to do more have to put in that extra work of reaching out to join, which would show initiative of them wanting to be there. I understand the hardships of running a sector or assisting in it so a limitation could be put into place on the third life on if they can reach command or if they just cannot be apart of command. Are there any disadvantages of making this change to the server? If so, explain. - I believe the only disadvantage I could see is that some members of command would have a bit more work. Who would this change mostly benefit? - Anyone who is looking to do more or have something to do in the off time of their other lives will benefit from and enjoy this change. I also believe anyone who is wanting to explore more or has been itching at joining another brach will enjoy this as well. Please link any workshop content, screenshots, or anything that you think may be helpful to those who view this suggestion - N/A
  21. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_cq77MVwoF_mNOMRk-TucqPBBWfXk9zKCs3nQDeMmxY/edit?usp=sharing
  22. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zp3ifyCEJ_9buJRoDXr7mpbO4LbJgzi0PgGDR8F9oo8/edit?usp=sharing
  23. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tE0-cDR1CidFXDlIK8C4W05Q94iVMS77aiysP3gS0s8/edit?usp=sharing Please view on PC I do hope you enjoy
  24. Lore Name: Carrots Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:174399337 Rank: ER Activity Level: 1/10
  25. Roster/IG Name: Carrots Rank : IA SteamID : STEAM_0:1:174399337 Activity [1-10] : Around 2 hours so far, haven't been home much since trained Suggestions / Comments : N/A
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